LMAO! Noticed a few weirdly structured sentences but ignored it in favor of reading. Other than that *giggles at the thought of babysitter!John* Maybe you could write that one up, the babysitter!John I mean. Something much more ordinary. Update soon~
Oh yes, there's a line in [square brackets]. I think it was a note from your beta and you forgot to edit it out or something :/
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Date: 2010-11-23 03:06 pm (UTC)Oh yes, there's a line in [square brackets]. I think it was a note from your beta and you forgot to edit it out or something :/